I've started over because I didn't like how the story was going. It's still the same if you have started to read it, I just changed the format of it a bit. The first four chapters are up and ready to read :)
For those who don't know about the story here is the synopsis:
Jamie and Ralph are twins. When they were kids they did everything together. As they got older, it was realized that Jamie was the favorite twin. That however didn't stop them from loving each other. Even the many differences they had didn't stop them from hanging out.
The only thing that did stop them was a bullet. Three in fact in Jamie's body. Now Ralph is left alone holding on to the guilt of his death.
But Jamie comes back, not only to see Ralph but to kill all those who wronged him. Would Ralph help him, or put himself in a grave next to him.
Here is the link to the story:
